Yeah, well, I started rewriting chapter 4 from the heroine's POV and that's not working either. The scene concept works with the story, but something is missing in the execution. I think I jinxed myself when I told my friend
Brenda that I was surprised with how well it was flowing. I'm going to play with it for a little bit longer and if I'm not making any significant progress I'll stop for the night and tackle it tomorrow!
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