Let The Butchering Commence!

Fractured Paradise and I have a date. We both want to be ready for some May and June contests. Yesterday I started a bit o'work on the story. Today I've been tearing the first chapter apart and shaping it into something that actually works. Thanks to my good friend and CP Cat, I'm finally at a place where I feel confident enough to proceed with the slicing and dicing. And the rebuilding. I'm only 6 pages into it, but I'm getting somewhere and I like it! Woohoo! Between Cat, Caitlin and my other CPs who will be reading this puppy before long, we might be able to produce a winner!