I Really DO Know What I'm Doing!

OMG! I'm so excited about Danger and this request now! I've been planning more revisions. I managed to see some of what I can change for the better, but then I focused on what scenes I'd be willing to throw out for the sake of a better story. Yeah, I liked the 1st 2 chapters and the last 2. The rest was up in the air. Well, I started rearranging events to make the story more "author-logical" and not so "writer-forced" and WOW! It's already a better story! And add to that, my characters have stepped up and are helping me revise! How cool is that?